Atlas
By Ian Black
My own twist on the story of Atlas
Category: Poetry
Genres: Mythical, Romance
Poem 1
My love and I -
Live on opposite sides
Of an eternal road,
A living divide
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She lies in heaven -
Where there is no more pain
Her life is done,
She has nothing to gain
-
I can't be with her
I can't serve my will
My life is essential
I'm needed until,
All time is over,
All feelings have ceased -
Then I can lay down,
At long last, have peace
-
My name is Atlas,
I hold up the sky.
I'm too old to let go,
Not too old to cry.
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I could ease my burden,
Release this whole world.
Bring an end to creation,
Just to see my one girl.
But she won't let me do it -
She makes me go on.
When eternity ends
You will soon find me gone.
You will find me in heaven,
In love and in mirth.
When I am no longer -
The bearer of earth.
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im quite liking the my boy builds coffins thing, it works :) and you write good poetry babe.
absolutely amazing man, your best, i know i say that all the time but this sets the mark.
I'm sorry I've only read it three times, It's like miss Potter I must let it meander through my brain a few times
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Love love love love love love love it. Helps that I love myths and Gods, be it Greek, Egyptian, Atlantian or Norse....hehe :) You write such charming love poetry. It really soothes me to read your work, and i commend you highly. Love this.
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Posted 10 months ago
I love this one.