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Fire from Within
By BrokenWings

tell me how you interpret this please :)

Category: Diaries/Journals
Genres: Psychological, Spy

Chapter 1

I feel it running in my veins,
Just beneath my skin.
The anger burns deep in my soul,
A fire from within.

With every passing moment,
The rage continues to build.
Untill I can't control myself,
And I'm forced to do God's will.

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Rob Shepherd

Rob Shepherd

Posted 10 months ago

I enjoyed this greatly. Personally I enterpreted this as an uncomfortable urge, an unwelcome feeling that you have to do things that are beyond your control that you detest yet seem to have to be done through somebody or something else's choice or decision. And the resentment of this within you at the same time at having these feeling and emotions. A very clever and passionately written piece, thank you for sharing it.

Lana Watson

BrokenWings

Posted 10 months ago

I'm glad you liked it :)

leslie purdy

Dick Sardon

Posted 10 months ago

YOU'VE GOT IT.YEH!

Lana Watson

BrokenWings

Posted 10 months ago

Dick, how did you enterpret this ?

leslie purdy

Dick Sardon

Posted 9 months ago

I know that if we don't have these very strong feelings of just anything,we are nothing,we might as well be a piece of cow dung,but killing someone may not totally clear the air,because how can we be sure,a mistake may be lurking under all our thoughts.

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