I once was there
By Dave Atherton

wow. i loved this. the flow of this poem is exsquisite. i absolutly adored every word. the words of this are still dancing around in my head like a ballerina dancing for her life. beauty and grace, yet desperation and seriousness. i loved it. beautiful. and i think that you could do well at poetry, very well indeed judging by this piece.

After that all I can say is agreed!

wow, this is amazing. This is a very powerful poem, with very descriptive vocabulary and will play on peoples minds. In a good way of course. This will remian in my head as a wonderful, exsiquite poem, which its words, bring such powerful images into my mind. Well done. :)